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It was terrifying. Kishins were biting at me like zombies, the rain pouring down hard like hail, but that wasn't the worst part.

It was the bodies....

I screamed a blood curdling scream, not one I've ever heard myself use before. There, lying limply on the cold wet ground, was Marcus's body. And Riley's. And Damion's. And Justin's. There were some bodies I didn't know, most likely simple civilian's, but one body belonged to Black*Star. An older girl with a long black haired ponytail was beside him, dead just like everyone else. Another was a boy with white hair( at least I could see some white, there was some blood in it), arm transformed into a death scythe, and a girl with taupe brown hair was lying next to him. Then there was Kid's body; he was next to the two girls, dead and in an asymmetrical position. Who could have done this? When I find them, I swear to God I'll-

"I wouldn't be saying that if I were you...." a voice said. It was a woman's voice, cooing and taunting me with her sick words.

"Who are you!? Come out and face me you sick bitch!" I yelled. The Kishins had vanished, disappearing in a flash of dark purple smoke. In their place stood a woman with short blonde hair, two long pieces of hair twirled in the front, black snake tattoos running up her arms. She was a witch.

"Now, now, don't be so rude to me. My name is-" I cut her off.

"Why not!? You're a witch aren't you!? I have every right to be rude to you!" My eyes went wide, full of anger" Did you kill these people? My last bit of family!?"

"Nope," She turned back on and began to walk down the long path of dead people, " You did...."

No. That's not possible, I would never do something like this. Never in a million years. I heard a low whimpering sound come from behind. I whipped around to see a little boy, cowering and crying in a little ball. No, it's not possible, it can't be...

I screamed.


I screamed. I bolted up, heavily panting and sweating, taking in my new surroundings. I was in the nurse's office, in a clean white sheeted bed. Thank god, I though, it was just a dream. There were many people I didn't know in my room, but they were from my nightmare. The boy with white hair, Black*Star, the tall black haired girl, Kid's weapons, and the girl with the taupe hair. Black*Star jumped on top of me and hugged me so tightly I couldn't breath.

"______! ______!" He yelled in my face, shaking me like a rag doll," ARE YOU OKAY!? DON'T WORRY, BLACK*STAR'S HERE NOW!!"

Yeesh, and thought Marcus was loud...

"C-can't b-b-breath..." I wheezed. Black*Star was hit in the head with a book and placed in the bed next to mine.

"I'm so sorry about him...." The tall girl gave me an apologetic smile," I'm Tsubaki, Black*Star's weapon."

"Hi, I'm ______" I said quietly. If I really did do those things, I didn't want to get too close to them.

"I'm Maka." The short girl came up and held out a hand," Maka Albarn."

"Hello Maka," I shook her hand," I'm ______."

I was kinda expecting the boy to come up and introduce himself, but he stayed quiet, leaning up against the wall with an un-amused look on his face, a little similar to the face that Justin make's when something is misplaced or a few cm's to the left or something. Justin..

I looked around the room one more time. Marcus was playing my 3DsXL in the corner, Kid's bubbly weapon looming over him, grinning and giggling like an idiot. Riley was over against the wall reading a magazine with Kid's other weapon, Maka was scolding the white haired guy, and Tsubaki was fanning Black*Star with the same book that hit him, sighing and cursing at him under her breath. I feel sorry for her...

I sighed. Marcus looked determined on whatever he was playing, most likely Pokémon.

"You," I pointed to the girl next to Marcus," What's your name?"

I received no response, just a giggle and her shouting," Die! You Plasma scum!" and more giggling.

"Her name's Patty." the taller of the two weapons sighed," She's my little sister, but don't mind her, she's always like that....."

"Okay then, what's your name? I'd at least like to know who's in my room."

"Her name is Liz!" Riley squealed in a girly matter that she's never done before," She is so amazing!! You have got to get in with that three stripe guy, ______! That way, she can be my sister in law!"

While Liz and Riley began to talk about celebrity gossip and what not, I yelled at the top of my lungs," Justin!"

As if on cue, Justin came bursting through the doors, Damion trailing behind him," Are you okay, ______? What happened?" His hair was dis-shelved and he was sweating like he ran a 10 km marathon. Damion didn't really have any emotion on his face, but his red eyes were filled to the brim with worry.

"I'm fine, I just didn't know where you were..." He came over and gave me a little squeeze before handing me my 3DsXL. I didn't even hear Marcus whine.

"Hey! I was playing that!"

And there he goes...

Odd, I thought, where's Kid? You'd think he'd be here since it's kinda his fault. Damion explained that when Kid's head hit my jaw, I fell backwards and hit my head off the ground, knocking myself out. Man, that's really embarrassing.... But there was one thing I didn't understand. Why am I dreaming about a witch? It didn't matter right now, but I guess I'll find out sooner or later.

Kid came walking through the doors, gloom written all over his face, and a nurse coming in behind him" Hey, ______....."

I didn't get a chance to reply, because the nurse spoke to me," Okay, I did an exam on your brain and everything seems to be in check. Take these pills before you go to bed for the next two weeks. When you run out, come see me and I'll do another test." She handed me a small container full of purple pills.(D12 and Eminem inspired from the song "Purple Pills" LOL..)

"Okay, thank you." I placed them in my pocket and headed out the door, not bothering to wait for anyone else. While Justin stayed back to discuss some things with the nurse, Kid, Maka, Tsubaki, Black*Star, Liz, Patty, Damion, Marcus, Riley and the other guy came following after me. I don't know where else I've seen him besides my dream, but he looked very familiar.

"Um, _______....."Kid began, sadness dripping from his voice like venom, " I want to apologize for what I did. I understand completely if you never want to see or speak to me ever again."

What!? Is this guy insane!?

I defeated the Team Plasma grunt and closed my Ds," Booyakasha..." I muttered at the electronic in my hand, and turned back to Kid, " Are you stupid or something? Why the hell would I hate you? It was an accident, no harm done."

Kid's golden yellow hues lit up," Really!? You forgive me?"

I sighed and gave him a hug, "Of course I do, dummy!"

I released Kid and slowly made my way to the albino," And you! Where have I seen you?"

He gave me a odd look and raised an eyebrow," You seriously don't recognize me?"

"I do, but I can't place my finger on it...." I poked his cheek and took a closer look at him. White hair, albino skin, red eyes. Oh, now I remember him!

"Oh!" I snapped my fingers," You're that guy who always comes to the music store on Saturdays!" I worked at the local music store downtown Death City. When summer came to an end, I had to go from full time to part time, but I only worked on Wednesdays and Thursdays anyway.

"You got it," He stuck out his hand," I'm Soul, Soul Eater Evans" He smirked and winked at me. I blushed and introduced myself. For the rest of the day, I hung out with these people. Eventually Marcus and Riley went home, and Damion got tired, so I was left with my new friends. Being knocked out wasn't the best way to start the first day of the school year, but this was just the beginning, I had a good feeling about that.

But something was still off, When I went to bed later in the evening, every body at their own houses, I had a feeling I was being watched...





Okay, this is really late. I want to finish this, but i don't at the same time. not to mention i had writers block. Sorry that it's so short. I really want to try and update this at least three times a week and such, but if I get writers block again, I'll be posting something in my journal to ask for help.

Thanks for reading! Enjoy!~
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aoboj Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I am very interested in this story. You have a lot of talent. Keep it up :) 
deaththekidfan229 Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
WHAT? MEUSA..uouou
00ponytail00 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
That was perfect :)
deaththekidfan229 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
deaththekidfan229 Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
AllCh3mical Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
TMNT reference! =D Not sure if that was intentional but, I still love you for it! Woot! Go Mikey! Booyakasha!
TMNTRaphaelTina Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2014
AllCh3mical Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Woop woop!
AskFirestormThePony Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013
Yay! You did a great job, and should continue writing stories! >_< my personality is way too childish!!!
DarkEcila Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
oh no Stalker alert! LOL 
KuranYuuki100 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013
Do you take requests?
FlameBladeGirl5362 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Professional Writer
Yes. If you have one, please see my journal entry and leave your request in the comments. Please note that this is the last day for requests.
KuranYuuki100 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013
Oh okay... ill surely do that.
SillyGurl19 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Love it!!! >u<
Kurahei Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Team Plasma...? Pokemon...?
^ if So..Then N!!!! :D
If not, -Sadness-
Ok Great job on dis~
FlameBladeGirl5362 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Professional Writer
Yeah, N is a cool dude. Well, not in black and white, but not too shabby in the latest ones!
deaththekidchan1 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I loved it!!! Please continue! :D
Konakona321 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
MEDUSAAAAA!! :iconcronasaysnoplz:
keasterwo8902 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Student General Artist
That was ...................... AMAZING :iconbrohugplz:
VocaloidRxL Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
THIS IS AMAZING! YOU EVEN INCLUDED MEdUSa!! Wow so your gonna add some action in this COOL yay! Lol cause some fanfic's like this just show stupid romance and nothin else, and now this is officially a really GReAt story!! :D can't wait for the next chapter!
Invisiperson Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ooh!!!!!!This is great!!!!! Keep going!!!! :iconpweaseplz: PWEASE!!! :icondeaththekiddlaplz:
Angel0fD4rkness Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013
I really hope you finish it i really like it :D
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